Monday, March 26, 2012
Tuesday, March 20, 2012
Sunday, March 18, 2012
Saturday, March 17, 2012
Tuesday, March 13, 2012
Sunday, March 11, 2012
Melting Snow - three poems in one.
Shane Sells and I tried something different in the way of writing. I often talk to Shane via Skype and I suggested that we pick a topic (for a poem), and we would write alternate lines. The topic was picked and away we wrote some twenty odd lines of poetry.
Here is the poem.
Melting Snow by Paul Howlett and Shane Sells (original)
SPRING IS ON THE BREEZE
LAST OF WINTER'S FREEZE
COMING SOON THE GRASS
FUN TO MOW
TOO SHORT TO HOE
HEY NO MORE SNOW
MOIST GROUND APPEARS
BASEMENTS ARE FLOODED
BROWN ALL AROUND
LOTS OF BARE GROUND
NO BUDDING YET
BIRDS TWEET IN THE TREES
THINKING OF THE BUMBLE BEES
GETTING DOWN ON MY KNEES
SO THANKFUL FOR MORE SUN
TREES SOON IN BLOOM
TIME TO LEAVE THIS STUFFY ROOM
GET SOME FRESH AIR
WHILE THE WEATHER IS FAIR
LOTS OF WALKS IN THE PARK
NO MORE COLD & DARK
WATCH OUT FOR THE DOGS THAT BARK
THE SNOW HAS LEFT WITHOUT A MARK
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Then I used the old David Bowie “paper and scissors” method of cutting up the poem and rearranging the lines to see if another edit or version would look. I subsequently rearranged the original into two successive edits. I like the result and so does Shane.
Melting Snow by Paul Howlett and Shane Sells ( Edit No 1)
GET SOME FRESH AIR
WHILE THE WEATHER IS FAIR
LAST OF WINTER’S FREEZE
NO MORE COLD AND DARK
THE SNOW HAS LEFT WITHOUT A MARK
MOIST GROUND APPEARS
HEY NO MORE SNOW
BROWN ALL AROUND
COMING SOON THE GRASS
TREES SOON IN BLOOM
NO BUDDING YET
SPRING IS ON THE BREEZE
LOTS OF WALKS IN THE PARK
BIRDS TWEET IN THE TREES
SO THANKFULL FOR MORE SUN
GETTING DOWN ON MY KNEES
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Melting Snow by Paul Howlett and Shane Sells (Edit No 2)
GETTING DOWN ON MY KNEES
LOTS OF BARE GROUND
WHILE THE WEATHER IS FINE
HEY NO MORE SNOW
BASEMENTS ARE FLOODED
LAST OF WINTER’S FREEZE
TIME TO LEAVE THIS STUFFY ROOM
WATCH OUT FOR DOGS THAT BARK
GET SOME FRESH AIR
LOTS OF WALKS IN THE PARK
THINKING OF THE BUMBLE BEES
TREES SOON IN BLOOM
SO THANKFUL FOR MORE SUN
NO MORE COLD AND DARK
BIRDS TWEET IN THE TREES
COMING SOON THE GRASS
FUN TO MOW
SPRING IS ON THE BREEZE
Saturday, March 10, 2012
The Poetry Competition - a poem about poetry
The Poetry Competition
By Paul Howlett
The International Poetry Competition
Asking for entries to win
Many Oh many poems to send
But wait, the prizes are small
For such pricey admission
You’d think that the prize
Would be great
Look at the cost of entering
Look at the size of the prize
Without even posting a poem
You’ve way ahead and wise
Profit goes to the people
Who run the damn thing
Not the poor poets of note
Baring their souls to the world
Spending their hard earned money
For a chance to win
What a joke.
Thursday, March 8, 2012
Wednesday, March 7, 2012
SCUBA DIVING - a poem about sharks
Scuba Diving
by Paul Howlett
Scuba diving just for fun
Deep in the ocean
Down in the deep
Lots to look at
Without giving you the creeps
Sharks come to visit
Sting rays and all
Lots of critters
Just having a ball
Are you worried?
Does that shark have a bite?
Lots of nasty teeth showing
But don’t die of fright
The shark is just looking
You’re too big to eat
Blowing lots of bubbles
Making lots of noise and all
The shark I am sure
Is more a lot more appalled
At your size and manner
The noise of your regulator
Sure sounds like a siren
To the ear of the shark
Give them warning
Not to mess with the human
Make scuba diving fun
Enjoyment and pleasure
For one and for all.
Friday, March 2, 2012
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